Once Upon a Time there was a handsome boy named JayJay. He lived in a small cabin with the sight of a nearby river. He was a poor boy but he had the ability to heal anyone who was injured. The problem was, no one believed he was able to do this. He felt betrayed, but one day he saw a girl bleeding to death. He decided to heal the girl in front of the whole village, and that’s when the people made a celebration about this amazing save, and gave him the label, Chief.
Hi Trendy my name is James, and im from Pompallier Cathloic school.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story and I enjoyed it. But you lengthed you scentences just a little bit.