My Picture Book Writing
It’s a wonderful day, but i’m getting bored, I have no where to play, so i am going to lord.
But I’m actually going to our solar system, where there’s a lot of wisdom. 5 4 3 2 1, off i go to the sun.
Mercury is closest to the sun, it’s a rocky world, but now i’m here let’s have some fun. Venus is the second planet closest to the sun, and by the way it’s the hottest one, but i shall go now, so off i go.
I’ve already been here so to the next planet!!! Off i go.
Mars is the fourth planet from the sun, OH NO THERE’S AN ALIEN NOW I SHALL RUN, oh wait he is a kind one, but i should go now, so off I go.
Jupiter is the fifth planet from the sun, Oh and it’s the largest one, but i can’t stand on it, so i should go, and off i go.
Saturn is the sixth planet from the sun, it has one big ring, and here’s the thing, that i should go now, so off i go.
Uranus is the seventh planet from the sun, and by the way it has 27 moons, oh look what i found it’s my spoons, but i should go, so off i go.
What an adventure i had, and none of them are good to live in, and i’m really glad of that, so no more looking for another planet to live on, because this is the right planet to live on.
But I’m actually going to our solar system, where there’s a lot of wisdom. 5 4 3 2 1, off i go to the sun.
Mercury is closest to the sun, it’s a rocky world, but now i’m here let’s have some fun. Venus is the second planet closest to the sun, and by the way it’s the hottest one, but i shall go now, so off i go.
I’ve already been here so to the next planet!!! Off i go.
Mars is the fourth planet from the sun, OH NO THERE’S AN ALIEN NOW I SHALL RUN, oh wait he is a kind one, but i should go now, so off I go.
Jupiter is the fifth planet from the sun, Oh and it’s the largest one, but i can’t stand on it, so i should go, and off i go.
Saturn is the sixth planet from the sun, it has one big ring, and here’s the thing, that i should go now, so off i go.
Uranus is the seventh planet from the sun, and by the way it has 27 moons, oh look what i found it’s my spoons, but i should go, so off i go.
What an adventure i had, and none of them are good to live in, and i’m really glad of that, so no more looking for another planet to live on, because this is the right planet to live on.
Task Description: We were writing a picture book story about our solar system and then we would explain what things are in space. One person will be chosen to print out there's and give it to room 18, so they can read it.
kia ora trendy i like the work you have expressed about visiting the 8 planets that was a pretty good ryhme. Keep up the good work.
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